
breathe
August 7, 2007today i hope for tomorrows breath,
once I resurface after swimming
from my dreams to yours,
breathing through your lungs,
stealing memories, ones
I could never own.
[this was a free write in gotpoetry.com's tag-team-poem project , the first line isn't mine, its from hotstuff]





Stunning and gorgeous.
very lovely poem
“breathing through your lungs, stealing memories.
Interesting poem, intermingling many feelings. Good job!