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breathe

August 7, 2007

today i hope for tomorrows breath,
once I resurface after swimming
from my dreams to yours,
breathing through your lungs,
stealing memories, ones
I could never own.


[this was a free write in gotpoetry.com's tag-team-poem project , the first line isn't mine, its from hotstuff]

3 comments

  1. Stunning and gorgeous.


  2. very lovely poem
    “breathing through your lungs, stealing memories.


  3. Interesting poem, intermingling many feelings. Good job!



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